tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post4437493526592095247..comments2024-01-03T04:03:15.300-05:00Comments on S.P. Bowers: Challenge!S.P. Bowershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comBlogger78125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-25981364350573718462012-02-27T13:44:40.487-05:002012-02-27T13:44:40.487-05:00I love how in detail you went during the story. Yo...I love how in detail you went during the story. You could feel the emotion between the characters. Great post. <br /><br />#191 if you get a chance to read.Gilliad Sternhttp://gilliadstern.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-31591163569928352292012-02-27T03:43:27.871-05:002012-02-27T03:43:27.871-05:00this post have lots of emotions. depicts the risk ...this post have lots of emotions. depicts the risk of sharing something which the man can't handle and i can relate to it. lovely post! keep up the good stuff!Dellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14718955220442774056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-6977578455515683132012-02-26T22:42:23.114-05:002012-02-26T22:42:23.114-05:00I like the pin prickle details, how that pain was ...I like the pin prickle details, how that pain was a relief.<br /><br />When I first read the opening lines, I thought her lungs and stomach were literally missing. I thought it was a horror story. lol.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-63174936411861388632012-02-26T17:13:48.820-05:002012-02-26T17:13:48.820-05:00I enjoyed this, it leaves me with interesting ques...I enjoyed this, it leaves me with interesting questions :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-15536106288459876542012-02-25T21:03:14.104-05:002012-02-25T21:03:14.104-05:00I'm #121. Come take a look at it if your board...I'm #121. Come take a look at it if your board or just have some time.Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07095267602200187313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-77814085215710953362012-02-25T20:58:47.281-05:002012-02-25T20:58:47.281-05:00Great imagery. I just wonder, what was she?Great imagery. I just wonder, what was she?Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07095267602200187313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-46621128294177793162012-02-24T07:33:17.675-05:002012-02-24T07:33:17.675-05:00Wow!! Enjoyed it though I can feel the lump in the...Wow!! Enjoyed it though I can feel the lump in the throat. Nice writing :)Naresh Khoisnamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04466279465475629479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-30986757485011615492012-02-23T15:30:25.235-05:002012-02-23T15:30:25.235-05:00Really good story! I like it. Very emotional, ve...Really good story! I like it. Very emotional, very tense, very sad. I'm a new follower and entry #96.Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-69907262676694385262012-02-23T12:08:03.493-05:002012-02-23T12:08:03.493-05:00This is so wonderfully written. Very intense emoti...This is so wonderfully written. Very intense emotion with so few words!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12146136846875431598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-9261314556072048382012-02-23T09:48:31.436-05:002012-02-23T09:48:31.436-05:00Wow. I definitely wanted to know more about what ...Wow. I definitely wanted to know more about what happened before this scene and felt all the too late regret of the character. Great job!<br />#160Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-2367286827934296002012-02-23T09:10:06.563-05:002012-02-23T09:10:06.563-05:00LOL - so true.
I enjoyed it, too... definitely fe...LOL - so true. <br />I enjoyed it, too... definitely felt her anguish.<br />Melissa Maygrove<br />#149 on the Campaign Challenge listMelissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-9640978845372927822012-02-23T07:12:28.248-05:002012-02-23T07:12:28.248-05:00Thanks Jen,Thanks Jen,S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-78114788062452678262012-02-23T07:07:46.711-05:002012-02-23T07:07:46.711-05:00Thanks,Thanks,S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-55298894513224445582012-02-23T06:24:54.578-05:002012-02-23T06:24:54.578-05:00What did she do for him to change his mind about h...What did she do for him to change his mind about her?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-32079461917112445022012-02-22T23:32:27.765-05:002012-02-22T23:32:27.765-05:00Dark with a dash of gothic flavor...I like it!Dark with a dash of gothic flavor...I like it!Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00912167351889969855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-37438743573143185362012-02-22T19:11:19.991-05:002012-02-22T19:11:19.991-05:00Beautifully written. You have my vote :)Beautifully written. You have my vote :)Rebecca Barrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04007014501516438149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-9273017879800910342012-02-22T18:16:49.774-05:002012-02-22T18:16:49.774-05:00Ooh, this is good! What is she?? I was not expecti...Ooh, this is good! What is she?? I was not expecting it to go that route at all.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17973242728265092842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-68416877788681120422012-02-22T16:36:03.381-05:002012-02-22T16:36:03.381-05:00Great - you told so much story in so few words. I ...Great - you told so much story in so few words. I really enjoyed your entry.Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-14984680904957289102012-02-22T15:50:59.839-05:002012-02-22T15:50:59.839-05:00Very nice! Great job!Very nice! Great job!Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-83572378254759589422012-02-22T13:36:02.957-05:002012-02-22T13:36:02.957-05:00Enjoyed very much!!Enjoyed very much!!Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-40684970901796252182012-02-22T13:01:38.168-05:002012-02-22T13:01:38.168-05:00Great emotion! I loved the sense of regret and the...Great emotion! I loved the sense of regret and the mystery of who they are. So good!Peggy Eddlemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10241451940725996650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-32388632453267037842012-02-22T12:59:20.520-05:002012-02-22T12:59:20.520-05:00That was really great. I loved the emotion you cap...That was really great. I loved the emotion you captured in your story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-61836889500013511712012-02-22T12:29:36.965-05:002012-02-22T12:29:36.965-05:00You definitely grabbed my attention with this! I&#...You definitely grabbed my attention with this! I'm very curious now about what she is and why it caused "him" so much anguish.<br /><br />Good job and thanks for sharing!<br />JenJenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06683486631901017529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-45630257988003609922012-02-22T11:09:26.359-05:002012-02-22T11:09:26.359-05:00I liked how the shadows crept due to the passage o...I liked how the shadows crept due to the passage of time. Nicely done.<br /><br /><br />Lee (#126 on the Campaign Challenge List)<br />An A to Z Co-Host <br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a><br />Twitter: @AprilA2Z <br />#atozchallengeArlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-83528601653366510.post-4091328518726677712012-02-21T23:34:48.112-05:002012-02-21T23:34:48.112-05:00What is she? So curious!What is she? So curious!digillettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439806613517879373noreply@blogger.com